雅思写作小作文图表题怎么拿高分?5分钟搞定!

2022-05-13

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不少烤鸭在备考写作时由于大作文分值占比高,将大部分精力都放在了大作文上

但是,小作文对于写作高分也是一个非常重要的环节
而且相对大作文而言,因为小作文在框架和表达上相对稳定,所以想要拿高分更加容易。

但大家要知道,稳定≠固定,如果你在所有同一意思的表达中反复使用同一个固定单词(比如想要表达增加就全部都用"increase"),那你的分数也不会高到哪去。

因为雅思写作评分标准中很重要的一项就是Lexical Resource(词汇丰富度),如果你学会变着花样表达同一个意思,那你就能展现出你的词汇丰富度。

所以下面给大家介绍一下,在雅思小作文最高频出现的图表题中,你都能使用哪些词汇,以及有哪些能表达同一意思的替换词汇!

良心干货,建议先马后看!!


首先,一篇完整的雅思小作文基本分为开头段、主体段和结尾段。开头段通常是将题干中的信息进行改写。改写方法主要有替换动词以及句型。

这里有个通用句型介意运用到开头段:The +图表类型+ 动词+描述部分。根据这个句型,分别可以有以下词汇值得积累并使用↓↓


图表类型

diagram / table / figure / illustration / graph / chart / flow chart / picture/ presentation / pie chart / bar graph / column graph / line graph / table data/ data / information / pictorial / process diagram / map / pie chart and table/ bar graph and pie chart


动词

shows / represents / depicts / enumerates / illustrates / presents / gives / provides / delineate / outlines/ describes / delineates / expresses / denotes / compares / shows contrast / indicates / figures / gives data on / gives information on / presents information about / shows data about / demonstrates / sketch out / summarises...


描述部分

the comparison of… / the differences… / the changes... / the number of… / information on… / data on… / the proportion of… / the amount of/ data about... / comparative data... / the trend of.../ the percentages of... / the ratio of... / how the...

主体段需要对图形进行具体的数据分析。通常要描述 when / what / where + 数据分析+趋势分析 。

所以下面给大家介绍在描述趋势和变化时可用到的表达:


趋势类词汇

上升(动词):increase / rise / go up / uplift / rocket(ed) / climb / upsurge / soar / improve

上升(名词):a rise /   an increase / an upward trend / a growth / a leap / a jump / an improvement / a climb

下降(动词):fall / decrease / decline / plummet / plunge / drop / reduce / collapse / deterioriate / dip

下降(名词:a fall / a decrease / a reduction / a downward trends /a   downward tendency /   a decline/ a drop

趋势稳定(动词):unchanged / level out / remain constant / remain steady / plateau / remain the same / remain stable / remain static

趋势稳定(名词):a steadiness / a plateau / a stability / a static

逐渐增加(名词):an upward trend / an upward tendency / a ceiling trend



变化类词汇

快速变化(副词):dramatically / rapidly / sharply / quickly / hurriedly / speedily / swiftly / significantly / considerably / substantioally

快速变化(形容词):dramatic / rapid / sharp / quick / hurried / speedy / swift / significant / considerable / substantial / noticable

稳健变化(副词):moderately / gradually / progressively / sequentially

稳健变化(形容词):moderate / gradual / progressive /   sequential

轻微变化(副词):slightly / slowly / mildly / tediously

轻微变化(形容词):slight / slow / mild / tedious


百分百类词汇

分数 Fractions:

4% = A tiny fraction

24% = Almost a quarter

25% = Exactly a quarter

26% = Roughly one quarter

32% = Nearly one-third, nearly a third

49% = Around a half, just under a half

50% = Exactly a half

51% = Just over a half

73% = Nearly three quarters

77% = Approximately three quarter, more than three-quarter

79% = Well over three quarters



比例Proportions:   

2% = A tiny portion, a very small proportion

4% = An insignificant minority, an insignificant proportion

16% = A small minority, a small portion

70% = A large proportion

72% = A significant majority, A significant proportion

89% = A very large proportion


小作文的结尾就是对主体段的数据分析进行一个总结概括,但需要注意的是不要重复之前描述过的内容。并且最好不要加入自己的观点,选取图表中显示的内容作客观陈述即可。


如果让Native Speakers完成小作文中的数字图表类题目,
他们用哪些短语&句型来解答呢?一起来看看

see an upward trend 呈现出上升的趋势
-The housing market saw an upward trend in 2003.
-房地产市场在2003年呈现出了上升的趋势。(反义:witness a downward trend---呈现出下降的趋势)

-The prices of consumer goods witnessed a downward trend.
-消费品的价格呈现出下降的趋势。(联想:see an opposite trend---呈现出相反的趋势)

-In contrast, the cost of furniture and equipment saw an opposite trend.
-相比之下,家具和设备的费用则呈现出相反的趋势。

rocket to... 急速上升至……

-The petrol price rocketed to a record high
-汽油价格急速飞升到了历史最高纪录。(近义:soar to... 飞速上升至)

-The rate of heart disease soared to 79 per 1,000 people.
-患心脏疾病的比例飞速上升至79%。

peak at... 在某位置到达最高点

-The figures show that the unemployment rate peaked at 9.8% in October.
-数据显示失业率在十月份达到了最高点9.8%(近义:reach 10.the highest point---到达最高点)

-The crime rate rose throughout the 1990s and reached the highest pointin 2001.
-犯罪率在整个九十年代都在不断上升,直到2001年达到了顶峰。

a slump 下挫

-There was a slumpin the demand for new cars in 2007
-对于新车的需求在2007年有所下挫。

-There was a substantial decline in the unemployment rate/
-失业率有了显著的下降。

-The criminal-offence rate fell continuously from 2001 to 2011.
-刑事犯罪率从2001年开始到2011年,一直持续下降。

plummet to… 骤降至

-That number rose to 3,900 by 2004 and then plummeted to 760 by 2008
-这个数字在2004年达到了 3900,然后到了 2008年却陡然骤降到760。

-The number of full-time jobs generated by the retail industry dropped swiftly to 14,000
-零售业所提供的全职岗位数量驟降至14000。(反义:go up steeply to… 迅速升至…)

-Then the interest ratewent up steeply to 4.2%
-然后利率迅速升至4.2%。

bottom out--- 降至最低点

-The government claimed that the recession had bottomed out.
-政府宣称经济衰退已经要触底反弹了。(近义:drop to its lowest level 降至最低点)

Inflation dropped to its lowest level in five years---通货膨胀率降到了近5年来的最低点。

reach a plateau 进入平稳状态

-By 2002, this improvement had reached a plateau.
-到了 2002年,这种上升势头开始进入了一个平稳的阶段。

level out (at... ) / maintain the same level /remain stable 维持在(某个水平上)

-The number of cases of the disease remained relatively stable in 2009.
-在2009年,该病的病例数量维持在一个稳定的水平上。

fluctuate around... / fluctuate between...and…围绕...有所波动

-Their total leisure time per week fluctuated between 22 hours and 35 hours.
-他们每周的空闲时间在22个小时到35个小时间上下波动。

....is predicted. 某现象很可能将出现

-A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2020 and 2025.
-到2020年至2025年期间可能会出现一个戏剧性的增长。

…is anticipated. 某现象预期将发生

-A hike (n. 上升)in the oil price is anticipated.
-石油价格预期将会增长。

is projected to... / is forecast to... 预计将会…

-The figure is projected to reach 26.18% by 2050.
-到2050年,这个数字将会达26.18%。

exceed... 超过

-The energy available exceeded the energy demand from the late 1960s to the early 1980s.
-从60年代末到80年代初期,能源一直是供大于求的。

surpass... 超过

-The growth rate of Molosop is expected to surpass that of Densaunt by 2035
-Molosop的增长率被预测在2035年将超过Densaunt的增长率。

be twice as many as... 两倍于…

-The number of consumer complaints in 2005 was twice as many as that in 2001.
-2005年中顾客投诉的数量是2001年数量的两倍。

be three times as many as... / be four times as many as...是某事物的三倍/四倍

-The number of hospitals in this region is three times as many as that in Laneo.
-这个地区医院的数量是Laneo的三倍。

be in stark contrast with...与…形成鲜明的对比

-This is in stark contrast with 1990 when 60% of those who held an undergraduate diploma were men.
-这和1990年时 60% 的本科学历持有者是男人的事实形成了鲜明的对比。

is in marked contrast with... 与…形成明显的对比

-This new trend is in marked contrast with the trend it experienced in the 1980s.
-这种新的潮流和在80年代曾流行的潮流形成了明显的对比。

over the following... days / months / years 在之后的某段时间里

-The number of patients fell sharply over the following three months.
-在之后的三个月里,病人的数量急剧下降。

is only marginally more...than... 与…相比仅是略微更……

-Thus we can see that the new organization is only marginally more efficient than the old one.
-所以我们能看出这个新的机构与旧的那家相比也只是略微更高效一点.

is only fractionally more... than... 与…相比仅稍微更…
-The aging of the population is only fractionally faster than that in the last decade.
-如今人口老龄化的速度相比上个十年来说只是稍微加速了一点。

is considerably more...than... 远比…更加

-Keolho’s birth rate is considerably higher than that of Nowsba.
-Keolho的出生率远比Nowsba的要高.

in inverse proportion to... 成反比地

-The amount of money people save increases in inverse proportion to the amount they spend.
-人们省下的钱和他们花出的钱呈反比上升。

in proportion to... 成正比地

-The amount of energy consumed in this factory is in proportion to its number of products.
-这家工厂消耗的能源和它生产的产品数量成正比。

Not surprisingly, ... 相应很自然的是,……
-Not surprisingly, the number of cases of the disease dropped to approximately 1,700 in 2008.
-很自然地,这种病的病例数在2008年降到了大约1700。

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